All Comments on 'The Deepest Taboo'

by gymmyt

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
La-De-Da-Da-Da

Ra-ra-ra and all that stuff

Little Miss Conceit with her bought boobs and Mr perfect Body and his over-sized dickey get it on-

Next they will be giving each other O's by telling each other about their great bodies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I stopped reading when I read

about the breast implants. That's about as big a turn off as anything I can think of! There absolutlely nothing wrong about small breasts - they can be erotic as hell!

wolfarmywolfarmyover 18 years ago
poorly thought out, poorly written!

you might have done better but your mind set is all wrong, perfect body, perfect implants, bull crap!

Learn to write before you post AGAIN IF EVER!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I liked it! You are still young!

You are only going to get better, Don't let other people stop you from writing. As long as you enjoy it your style and flow will get better. I used to edit a Literary Magazine in College. Take some creative writing courses, and find a mentor to help and encourage you. Jimmie_Blakesong

milobixmilobixalmost 18 years ago
Great Story

Keep up the good work! There is nothing wrong with perfection.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
At "He is huge" I stopped reading

However I guess the children enjoy it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
this is an excellent story

Everyone knows about a boy's fascination with his mother's mommy-hole and his yearning to stuff his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of. What this story shows is that lots and lots of girls are just as attracted to their father's big fat daddy-dick--the dick that made them--and are just as anxious to have dad cram his big stiff prick up between their slender legs. Together with the love he feels for his darling baby girl, dad also feels the fierce need to shove his big prick up his Little Princess's adorable little coochie. Dad's given many presents to his baby girl, now he's going to give her the best gift of all--a great big twatful of his creamy sperm directly from his daddy-balls. Look, it's just natural. Dad gets a good look at his girl's pretty little twat--as in the story, she's often real eager to show her daddy her twat--dad gets hard, harder than he's ever been before, he's just got to stick his fat veiny cock up his beloved girl's beloved cunt, and his sweet little daughter receives her daddy's big prick with joy. Up his baby girl's cunt is where her daddy's sperm belongs.

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