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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Just no. Come on, at least try. Your premise couldn't be more wrong.

CollegeKid1992CollegeKid1992almost 10 years ago

I don't like anything about this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Pointless

The whole thing seems to be nothing more than a Freudian insight on your own insecurities. None of the female victims "deserve" the fate that befalls them, they simply exist to be "put in what you deem to be their places". Their is no point to these stories other than to reveal the opinions of the author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Eh I actually really like this. Misogyny is a turn on for me (and I'm a woman and a feminist... go figure)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
?????

The basic idea is good but the execution is spoiled by wooly thinking.

MisterteaMisterteaover 7 years ago
There are no words..

"Lauren of Arabia" - BWAAAAAAAAAAAHAHA

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The premise is fine...

Dear Author,

The premise is fine...the writing of the vignettes could use a bit of improvement. A little more detail on how and how much time it took these women to be broken would've improved them. The description doesn't have to be over the top but was it pain? Pleasure? Total domination? Humiliation? Drugs? Brainwashing? A combination of all of it or just some? These where hinted at but with no real detail.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
based

Hello, based department??

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