All Comments on 'The Devil Ch. 01'

It looks like it could be a very interesting story, am looking forward to the next chapter. Just wish it was a bit longer..

Really looking forward to the next chapter and to see where this leads. Please make them longer though.

Curious where this will go.

very intriguing and well written..pleasecontinue..can't wait for d next chapter..

I hope you continue with the story. It has a catchy tone and I can't help but wonder what happens next. Great job :D

A very nice start. I vowed I wouldn't be reading any more multi-chapter stories because I am so tired of writers never finishing them. But it looks as if you're posting regularly, so I gave it a chance. I'm glad I did.

I have to say although very interesting start it is kinda scary that he's hinking of how sexy this man is being that hes there cause a child is supposed to be getting abused, wether true or not kind of creepy a little.

Liked it so far. Going to next chap now.