by The_Technician
Twisted, beautifully written and suspenseful. The clues were laid just perfectly. It is evocative of Ellison's "Lonely Women are the Vessels of Time."
Not my genre, but still loved it. Awesome writing. Thank you!
Reminiscent of Poe, but modern. Loved the allegory, but was somewhat distracted by continual flashes of "For the love of God, Montressor."
Well done.
...but i enjoyed it. I found it really fascinating because normally dont like these kinds of stories. Well written and really creeped me out!!! 5 stars.
Creepy, sexy, well written and with the most eloquent retribution at the end. Thank you.
Very well written.. Stylish. Thoughtful. Classy eroticism, but still eerie enough for the season. Great job!!
Very different and very well written. I had some idea of what might happen, but not the circumstances. It was keeping me guessing til the end
Thanks