by herslave420
The fantasy is really sexy - It's one of my favorites! I wish the narrator had described herself as well. It would have been truly amazing to read a description of two beautiful, intelligent professional women at a business function who are concealing hot, sexy secrets and desires beneath their suits or dresses!
Definitely well written. It was descriptive, but not so descriptive that I couldn't envision a certain someone from my own fantasies as the other individual in the story. Certainly looking forward to reading more from you.
I loved the way you let us into the thoughts of the characters. It made the already hot description of the sex even better.
Write more!
Who needs dinner? Really after feasting on the entree the dinner can only be second best! well written.
L.O.L. Janice