All Comments on 'The Disciplinarian Ch. 01'

I can only speak for myself, but I found the start of this story very hot and exciting. Ignoring each womans limits and actually making the first pull her panties from her mouth to speak...well that was great. He let them know who was in control. Can't wait for more. Thank you. xoxo. Stefani

Really liked the story line, very sexy ... looking forward to more. Thank you!

Jess, Australia

Very well done. I wish more writers (though there are a few excellent ones here) could capture the essence of D/s as well as you have.

friend......one of the best story i ever read......as good as casino plot series !!!!!

Oh My! I loved this, has to be the best thing I have read on this site, I will be reading the next two chapters later this evening!

Hope you write a fourth chapter to this thrilling story... I'd especially read it if you add two things:

1.- Mr. Daniels fucking Soo May and

2.- Having the girls stopped being malicious towards Soo May or that Soo May tells them off for teasing her badly.

Very good Keep writing more

Perhaps one of the most erotic stories that I've read in months! What a business concept! I know that I would actually pay to work with someone like Mr. Daniels, and I'd definitely want to marry him.

As someone who is coming to appreciate his dominant side, may be a bit too late, I am awestuck by this story and the series in general. The writing does everything to build up the tension and I can actually witness myself spanking the three women, taking the role of Mr. Daniels.

Please continue this series.

PS I am so turned on right now. I read this series with my mouth wide open. And now I need to get a glass of water.

You did an excellent job of building up excitement and arousal. Well done, indeed. Keep up the good work.

great story. I loved it. well done. the progression between the girls was good - a bit predictable that they would do what they said they wouldn't but a good story.

What a loving service Mr Danials offers. I like what Soo May learned about herself.

A really good story. Thank you

Excellent spanking, good interaction among the women. Soo is an interesting narrator but why would any of the three friends benefit from a major league spanking? None are irresponsible or selfish.

Very well written and very arousing! I knew that the items the women wrote were going to occur that evening, otherwise they would be in control.

EXCELLENT. A beautifully descriptive story of dominance with three submissives, well executed without being verbose. I hope that you have more characterisation in chapter two.