by Grey Eagle 286
Great story, but are you sure Bill never found out about Jen? Maybe that's why he had the heart attack.... ;) J/K
Loved the story. :)
There are other types of stories than Trannys, TS, TG, and Gay. I understand that authors write about what they know best, but I do have very grave doubts that you have proclaimed your preferred sexual habits while visiting the Marine Force Recon, SEAL or ARmy Ranger groups.
Perhaps you will find the person who gave you information on military life and go back into writing in that field, once you have a source of information about it again.
What is it I don't buy? The whole additude concept from being male to female, over night almost. Nope don't buy it!
I liked the story, but it seemed a bit rushed and the ending was a bit abrupt. As usual, you do a good job with the characters.