All Comments on 'The Diversion of Doris Ch. 02'

by Wifetheif

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Redheaded_1Redheaded_1about 9 years ago
Love the story, love the author

Excited for more! It is a wonderful time that was chosen as a background for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Liked

Liked the story. Please finish your other story "How Much Do You Think I Would Bring"

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved It

A perfect balance of storyline and erotica.

ChequamegonChequamegonover 8 years ago
Nice story

Nice story so far. You should do some proofing, small things -- you called the emperor Retro in one spot. Nothing serious. Keep up the good work.

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