All Comments on 'The Divorce Chronicles Ch. 16'

Thank you.

Hey, darlin! As usual, another HOT story! LOVED it!

This was a great series but you did not finish it.

I mean, you get your protagonist in some interesting situations, but the sex scenes are all cut and paste

Put as much imagination into them as you do the plot, and this would be soooo much better

He goes from being a 20 year veteran of the monogamy wars to Casanova Cockmaster, scourge of the pretty panties in the blink of an eye? Too far for proper suspension of disbelief for my taste, even though I'd love to shag 70 to 80 % of the women I deal with, same as him. That's the trouble with male erotic writers, all their women think with balls not boobs, thus they are (un)naturally so easy it's just weird.

Do you have a reunion (though I prefer to call it wasted years) romance fetish? Because from submission list I see that you also wrote another story about reunion. I bet the other couple also split when the girl is still virgin.

Please finish the story

OK you suck this is the third of your stories I read and none of them did you finish what is your problem ?????

The last post was right why don't you finish your stories????

As I'm sure others will agree, please continue with your "super" series.