All Comments on 'The Dock Ch. 02'

love it when everything comes together

great second part. you are a great writer and storyteller keep it up.

Don't let someone else tell you how to write your story. I love it so far, and I can't wait for another chapter!

Again I like the characters and the way the story moved along. I'll be reading more of your stories later.

you are way to slow at adding chapters, this one took two years. IF you continue keep it to just them no other relatives or outsiders and keep all the fetish and BDSM crap out of it it just drags it into the gutter.

i love it, i can't wait for more!

thanks for bringing this back to life. I hope you have more coming soon. Its wide open and cant wait to see how it unfolds. ty