by slopoke1012000
I would have given a 4 but gave it a 5 because of the anonymous idiot's comment. Keep writing and ignore the fools who hate everything.
I read your story and thought it was very good. Most people are not as criticle as the other person that commented.
Please continue to write.
you can't even spell your tagline right (sepErates), nobody will read your story.
I gave you one star for sheer laziness.