All Comments on 'The Double Date That Didn't End Ch. 06'

Barely adequate...just kidding. Hot as hell! We had a couple that we bonded with very similiar to this and it was an absolute blast.

Hoping the final chapter leaves everyone happy.

Nothing like posting a story and having the first line of the first comment be "barely adequate." You got me with that one. Thanks for the REST of the comment though, glad you're enjoying the story.

Hot, hot, hot, well-written, actual character development, and emotions that build! Did I mention Hot? Tasty work...thanks for sharing. :)

Would fap again

If I usually want something done juuust right to my taste, I tend to read books and waste tons of time on learning it and then doing it myself.

I'm delighted to have found your account here and to not be forced to go that route when it comes to erotic ficiton. I've read all your stories, and I can say I thoroughly enjoyed them all. Judging from your stories and your favorites, we obviously share some turn-ons, and I also found the "story" parts of your stories to be very well-written.

By the way: excellent grammar and spelling as displayed here do actually help making the story hotter by not destroying your suspension of disbelief and ripping you out of an otherwise hot scene!

Very, very hot.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!