by Ygraine
The story is enjoyable but though well written the script lacks closure.
The ending should b edited to close the episode and indicate the path.
I think the story ends the way it has to. And it is clear to me that they both know it has to be that way, even though they might wish for things to be different. Wonderful story
This story is full of depth and beauty that is far too seldom seen on this site. The details of their feelings for one another are truly lovely in the telling! This shall be a favorite of mine for a long time to come.
So what if there's no sex in it. It's a beautiful story, well written like all of your stories. Thank you for allowing me to enjoy your graceful writing style and excellent stories.
No closure??? He has a wife and kids, they're friends, she has a responsibility dictated by fate. They shared their moment, but it was all they could have. That's the point. Love unrequitted is still love, and maybe the truest form of all...maybe Anonymous in london, posting in 2004 needs to learn to read and not *ahem* skim.