All Comments on 'The Dragons Breath'

Well done story, and a nice hook, told in retrospect.

The revenge at the end helped it also

very good job, I think that was the most intense story I have every read on here so far

So intense! I had to stop rubbing myself to finish it and then go back and cum, I hope all your work is as well written

So as a female who was raped u basically described eerything I've felt I was a virgin before I was raped an trust me it was the worst experience any one could go through.. I wish my rapist was dead but he's still alive some where.. Btw You're an amazing writer keep it up.

It's rare to read a story of rape told so sensitively and convincingly. It's more usual and less convincing to read of women who enjoy being raped. This is both sobering and kind of refreshing. Well done!

This was a great story, well-written, with a much more realistic view on rape. Most of these stories end with the girl loving it, but that isn't how real nonconsent works, and I love the realism. Plus, Drake is a very familiar character to a lot of girls. The popular guy who thinks he can have whatever he wants whenever he wants it, and Mia is like many real victims who live with that memory every day. Congrats on writing a really great story. And even if it was horrible of him to do that, the imagery and dialogue kept me turned on the whole time. :)

What a story. So visual. I'm left really thinking about it. Nice work.

and this was a good one. Credible, well told and loved the ending!

About how drake died?