All Comments on 'The Eavesdropping Daughter'

haven't been this hot in a long time pussy juice seeping into my panties

I could not stop reading this beautiful story. Mom is amazing, as is the daughter. And dad is just plain lucky. Don't stop now! I can't wait for the next chapter, and the next and the next ...

I can't believe how throughly I enjoyed this story. Its well past 4 am but I cluldnt stop reading it! I wanted a quick fix story but this became a 2 hour long event with many amazing orgasms. But not only that part, it was a wonderfully written story with an amazing plot! You're a wonderful writer and person please keep up the good work!

This story is amazing! My panties were thoroughly soaked the entire time I was reading. I must have cum atleast 6 times. Pretty please write more ;)

I've never had any desire to be with either of my parents, but I do have quite a few step-relatives that I would be lying if I said I hadn't fantasized about. This story was really amazing from beginning to end. Makes me wonder about my step-sisters...

Hot as hell! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise!

Best story ever. Sooo hot!!! Please add a sequel!!!

dam that storie is fukin hardcore

like i came in like 10 minutes do to the epic ending

ive seen some good stories the is definalty in my hall of fame

GOOD JOB BRROSKI

wow i couldnt wait to get to the end......... pleasemake a part and continue your story on..

Help I've rubbed my cock raw.

You need help. What the fuck is this? You sound like a pedophile

Wow!

This had me playing with my pussy the whole time. My neighbor knocked on the door and I brought her in and told her about the story. We read it together and soon were naked and eating each other's pussy. Took us two days to finish and I must have cum six times. She and I get together often and take turns making each other cum. We re-read this from time to time.

Oh my ... so fucking hot! I couldn't keep my hands off my cock. I actually came and so hard that my jism shot in my own moaning mouth! Never tasted myself before , was always afraid too but will do so from now on every time I shoot my load! All thanks to you.....keep writing end I'll keep wanking and eating it!

Please write a sequel with Vicky coming to visit!!! That story had me going from page 1.

I cum very strongly on each page. I fucked my mom very hard after reading this. pls write more.

This was absolutely brilliant! In all honesty, I was actually playing with my cunt from start to finish, and when the story finished... So did I! ;) marvelous! You made me a very horny girl, even during the more innocent scenes, your writing is so well done, that you enveloped me completely into the story with the pure detail and superb capture of their individual personalities and combined relationship dynamic. The bond and interaction of your characters was very believable. I applaud you! Thank you for an absolutely absorbing experience, and a fantastic climax in and out of the story. ;) I had an account on this site years ago, but can't for the life of me remember what it is, so I'm anonymous for now, but you can be sure that I will be creating a new one and reading any other material you have to offer. Keep up the good work.

This was truly amazing story,a constant hard on, vurtually all the way through.

well done.

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BEST EROTIC STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!

This is the best incest story ever!

I've got a cucumber in my pussy and am so wet. Great work

simply one of the best erotic stories I've ever read!

Dainty dubious Daddy's and Mommies pretty pussy play toy turned hot naughty, nasty. and best of all excitingly increasingly incestuous! It's really so very nice to have Daddy comforting his daughter. And Mommy got to play too. Pam loved the sweet nectar of her Mom's vaginal secretions. Dad got some nice sweet loving via the wet pretty pussy presented for his delight. Imagine, daughter listening in as Mom and Dad fuck furiously. She HAD to have some parental guidance. Daddy guided his well trained cock into daughter and Mom got to have her cunny licked. All in good hot action that is SURE to be repeated again and again. INCEST is ALWAYS BEST!

I couldnt stop fingering myself. I still am. brilliant work

i never thought i could get so turned on more please!!!!!!

Absolutely one of the best things I've ever read here. I'm sitting in a puddle right now . :)

i loved it!

This is, without a doubt, one of the greatest pieces of writings on the internet.

That was effin amazing. Kept me wet the entire time I was reading.

Excellent work.

Very detailed, took me two days to read it but was well worth it.

made me so fucking hot. have thought of fucking my wife and stepdaughter like that too !!

This is a brilliant story. Loved the way she seduced her parents. Great detailing of their love making. Would love to see a film version of it. Best one i've ever read. Keep it up.

First off, the idea of a daughter listening in & watching her parents role play incestuous sex is genius. It's one of those things where it's so simple, yet it's brilliant at the same time. Plus the fact that they recently moved and the daughter had some tension with her parents makes it even more hot. It adds to her surprise.

I was a little worried that the story would peak too soon when the daughter made her move (after teasing her parents) on her father at the top of the 3rd page, when it's a 6 page story. But it just kept on getting even more crazy, with the daughter tasting her mother off her dad's cock. Wow. That was incredibly erotic right there.

Plus the the thing with mom involved. Genius. I took me 3 times before I could finish the story for obvious reasons. Very hot.

Took me two days to read it, since I stopped reading it so many times to finish myself off!!!

Nice job.......great detail.

Would love to see what you think of my story so far.

britsoldieragain

one of the best stories i have read, made me so hot and hard , fucking my daughter while my wife eats her pussy will be the best sex ever, thank you and keepp writting more stories

I will be reading this o my lovers, hopefully his cock and her pussy will be as ready as mine are...

I have always loved your stories, but this one brought me to one of my most intense orgasms ever! I left puddles of sperm all over myself, it was that intense. The build-up was just as good, if not better. Keep writing these stories and we'll be leaving gallons of cum and pussy juice all over the place.

..I couldn't stop stroking....sooooo fucking wet with pre-cum....definitely going to look for another by this author

Jesus Fucking Christ!!! I had my fingers in my pussy all the way through this, and came blissfully in a puddle much like little pammy.

Keep righting

Well worth the read. Will be worth another read at a later date.

BY FAR THE BEST STORY I'VE READ. . . WONDERFUL THAT YOU'VE WRITTEN IN FIRST PERSON, I'M THE DAUGHTER OF TWO INCREDIBLY SEXY PEOPLE. . . I WAS ABSOLUTELY ENGROSSED IN YOUR STORY, PLEASE KEEP WRITING :)

well. i am no editor but i know what i like!! very well told story,,thought the timing was great and not told in a rush,,,very believable and romantic tale,,,room for more chapters if vickie visits!!

more like this please!!

...at least. Brilliant story very well told. Humour, pathos, angst, and SEX - what else does one need?

That was great. What more can I say. If I had a wife and daughter having read this then I would put all doubts about incest to one side and would hope to do the very same thing as in this story. Great story.

What a deliciously naughty story. I hope there will be more.

I loved this one and no it is not too long its just right! If someone can't finish a story in one sitting it is easy to copy and paste or frag and drop address bar to desk top. Walla instant short cut. I did same thing with your submissions page. Your naughty imagination is so much fun keep it up!

My cock was aching for relief from beginning to end. GREAT STORY!!!

Pammy was pamtastic cant wait for them all to get sticky with vicky and experimant togethr with anal activities what a story

my fingers were in my wet pussy most of the time. I must have cummed a dozen times..best story.

there was little or no anticipation for the reader. The daughter initiates everything without much teasing really. There just wasn't a sense of the forbidden or the illicit, but it was a fun romp.

Your story made me so wet and hot. I couldn't keep my fingers away from my pussy.

MMMMMM just the thought of having my Daddy and Mommy fuck me like that pushed me over the edge and I couldn't stop squirting my pussy cream all over the place.

I would love to read more of your stories.

Damn! this was so hot ...i literally cummed! XD

I went to your "other submissions" page after reading the first chapter of the I-Room............and The Eavesdropping Daughter caught my eye. Of Course I opened it.......Geez, I don't know if I'll be able to get thru chapter 2 without spurting my load all over. A daughter or Son, or both, overhearing parents fantasizing about sex with her/him/both, just drives me nuts!! I love it!! Do the parents already suspect Pammy might be listening/watching, and enhancing things for her carnal benefit? Or will Pammy have the ultimate thrill of revealing to them that she's discovered their depraved role playing, and that she wants to fulfill their nasty fantasy by joining them for a hot family fuck and suck fest?? Will she reveal to both of them at once, or tease one of them at a time to prolong the ecstatic buildup before eating daddy's cum out of mommy's pussy; or let mommy jack off daddy into her cocksucking mouth? Damn, the possibilities make my cock throb and jerk.........on to chapter 2. Thanks Ahabscribe, for just the kind of story that stokes my masturbatory fires like none other!!!

That was hot!

STEAMING IS JUST THE WORD!

Damn that was good!!!!!!!

best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a story!! oh man.... love the build up.. I personally prefer long stories but had to bookmark this one and split it into two sessions... am looking forward to reading all your other stories now. A personal fantasy come true with this one.... beautifully done.... thank you.

Like the others who have commented on this story, I hardly ever read stories that are over 2 pages long but I'm glad I decided to read this story. It's one of the best stories I've ever read here in literotica.

You are a wonderful storyteller !!! Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us. Wowwww that's one fantastic story !!!

Very rarely read stories over 2 pages and have never been moved to leave a comment before but that was incredible!

Lost count of the number of times I pulled myself back during this story because something told me it would be worth the wait. Holy crap! Thanks for making me a very, VERY happy bunny tonight. I know I'll be re-reading this story very soon. You are something else, Ahabscribe!

So hot I'm suprised (but thankful) my pc didn't catch fire !

Damn but your story was a hot one.... I seldom read a story over two pages long but with this one scroll and read with one hand and stroke my cock with the other.

If i was only so lucky.

WOW! This is a wonderful tale. The slow seduction and final get together was great. My cock was filling my wife,s cunt with juice as we both read and reread the story! Terrific stuff. Another chapter?!? My wife and I love your stories.

Ahabscribe, you spent days writing this sizzling hot story for us, and all we can give you is a 100. I'm sure you'll receive lots of 100's for this one too. Thanks.

I absolutely LOVED this story! It's like you crawled into my head and dug out my deepest, darkest fantasy. I will DEFINITELY be copying this to my HD so that I can re-read it to my heart's content in the future!

That story was exciting and riveting plus exciting again. I like the way you describe the mother, father and daughter relationships in the story. I like the way she seduced her father and her mother overtime.

This was one of the best stories about this subject on this site for a long time.I loved the way it built up and the finish was neither drawn out or ending with a quick bang.

Excellent is all I can say.

Cheers and thanks for sharing your writing skills with us.

HOT!

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Holy fuck! Brilliant, just brilliant! Even by your lofty standards. One your best (if not all time best) ever!

A couple of things, Great story first, And yes I liked it better being a long story. Better then being in many chapters.