All Comments on 'The Eavesdropping Daughter'

Hot

Absolutely a superbly crafted piece of erotica. Oh by the way, the past tense for blow is blew, not blowed

I swear this is the best story I've ever read. I've cum so many times

Wow what a great story with no other guy fucking her or the mom just like it should be. Good thinking

Seriously hot story. Enjoyed reading it. Additional chapters would be welcomed.

I completely adored this story. OMG, it's so well written and finds a happy medium between raw lust driven incestuous sex, and an unexpected innocence. Thanks so much for this gem.

I absolutely loved this story and I agree with Melwins comment 💯 God this Is so hot and I wish that we can upvote or down vote a comment like you can on reddit or tiktok or reply directly to the commentator but other than that excellent story 😀 God I came twice to this one 😀 😊

Absolutely great story and doesn't come up short like some I have read lately.. Lots of good fucking and sucking. I never messe?d around with any of my family except when I wzs13 I tried fucking my stepsister, but we didn't know how to it, knowing nothing about foreplay we didn't get very far. Then my Dad died and we both moved away and only saw each a couple of tmies. That wad many years ago

Some of these anon comments really Piss me off. Idc if YOUR fetish is that the mom "gifts" the daughter to the dad and stays out of the bedroom. This is the authors work and the author can write whatever the heck they wanna write and you have no say in that matter! For God sakes the comments on this site make me never want to share a work ever.

I loved this story it was hot as hell and I loved thst the mom was involved too because it was the authors vision.we are lucky they chose to share thier work with us!

Fantastic! One of the best I have ever read.

It would have been hotter if mum weren’t as involved. If instead she gifted Pammy to daddy, watched and just encouraged rather than joined in. Even hotter if they fooling around behind mum’s back. So hot. So nasty. Makes me so wet

I wish I was Vicky

One word.... Awesome!

very sexy, more please.

Loved it.. had to rub one out again and again and again. Very hot and sexy.

‘My world exploded, disintegrated and reformed bathed in wondrous light as his tongue began making love to my clitoris’

So good

Just amazing, next chapter may include Vickies visit?

I have truly enjoyed your great writing and creativity. I have noticed in several of your stories "labial lips, or labia lips" this is redundant. Perhaps another way to say what you mean would be pussy lips or vulvar lips. Thanks again for the great work you put into these stories.

Terrific! really great build up; you can feel the lust growing like bacteria in a petri dish!

Absolutely amazing. The best erotic story I have ever read. My heart was thumping in anticipation the whole time. And obviously my cock was raging hard.

Wooooooooooooooow purely amazing. I would love it even more if Pammy become pregnant with daddy. I love such incestuous stories where the girls become pregnant with either father or son.

Exciting! I've experienced every single moment of Pammy's seduction. Eventually, I would have hoped that Pammy had communicated to her parents-lovers that she was pregnant with her father.

finally a couple married for 20 years and still fucking like crazy. Didn't notice the grate in the ceiling though is a bit unbelievable. Still great story 5 stars

Hot,sexy, loved it.

This is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. Well written and realistic my girlfriend and me. Read this story together and you u guess can imagine what it did to us. We both enjoy stories with son or daughters. Btw she has a nineteen year old daughter who lives at home with us. I wonder if ???

the best story ever, I have really enjoyed reading every single word. well written, very true to life, every husband and wife should have a daughter like Pam. with two loving parents that both love and enjoy her as well as each other. looking forward to your next story. great work, love it

Probably the best story on Literotica, filled with so much love and passion.

Every man should have an experience like this, having a threesome with his wife and daughter and watching them pleasuring each other.

I have been beating my meat for two days as I read this in the evenings when I got home. My wife keeps asking what it is that has me so hard for so long. We have long ago had to give up intercourse due to her issues but enjoy personal sex at any time without reserve. No other story ever has had me where I can't let myself go for so long. I edge constantly during the evenings while watching tv. Wow what a daughter.

Back to beating off, I just had to tell you what it did to me. By the way my wife just ask how long the after effects were going to last. She loves to see me beat off by myself.

If i could give you a higher score ...... This had my cock hard from beginning to end. Great story well written...

Part 2 with vicky????

I'm an only daughter like Pammy. I remeber hearing my parents get busy in their room and just having to masturbate immediately because I was so turned on. It never passed from that, but a girl can imagine.

Awesome story. I have four sisters and fantasized about them being Pam, it was so hot. One thing though. Why is this story tagged MMF? It's clearly not at all.

One the absolute best stories on this site....period!!

Just amazing, as the Daughter finds all about Daddy and Mommy's naughty thoughts about her, and what they would do with her if she knew....

This story definitely needs more than just 5 stars!

Wish I had a mom to eat my soaking pussy.

Absolutely Amazing.

I loved this tale from beginning to end, I must admit that I played in sync with every kiss stroke and fuck .

If only I could explore the delight.

This story is amazing. I have a step daughter and I wish I could get this lucky. I hope you continue to write more!!

On this site there are many cooky cutter stories, this is not one.

This is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read

I had to take out my vibrating dildo just on the first page

Please make more!!

its 1:42 in the morning and my 14 year old self is throbbing with this in which i have to masturbate away to.

I want a baby at least in Pam even the mom at the same time

Yes! I think Cathy and Pammy getting pregnant would be good - if Vicky joins them. I think that anal should be avoided to keep this from being too cliche'. Wish I could have seduced my Mommy the way Pammy got her Daddy. I remember the first time I saw Mommy naked. She stood at the bathroom vanity applying makeup, naked, when I walked by and stopped. She turned to me and I could see her thick bush. I was in my Y-fronts with an erection and she just turned and stood there and I had my first daytime orgasm that I remember. Yeah, I'd like to have seduced my Mommy that day, or any other day. This is so hot, but I don't think I'd have enjoyed a three way with my Dad and Mommy.

Please keep this going...... Maybe the friends from Texas visit with their daughter or Vicky cums for a week......

Great story wish it kept going. Are u going to make another story. They whole chapter thing was a great idea with this story it didn't just drone on an on. Fantastic is all I can say. Why don't u ask for new topics and go from there

This is without a doubt the best story I have ever read and I am 69 y. o. Please do add some pregnancie to the mix and another chapter.

Did she get her mustang?

how about both mother and daughter getting pregnant and then the children fucking each other?

I love this story so much, I came 3 times.

i really liked it!! it made me horny so many times.

FUCK LOVED IT - GREATEST INCEST STORY - WANNA BE PART OF THAT FUCKING/SUCKING FAMILY - JUICES RUNNING DOWN MY LEGS AND MY PUSSY IS SO HOT! WANT TO FUCK WITH THEM!

fuckin' hell!

That was about the best incest story I have ever read in all my years of reading incest stories. My wife and I love incest and even now fantasize about our sons and daughter as we fuck. She has a fantasy of fucking both boys while I fuck our daughter. Then when we really get horny, I allow my sons to fuck my ass while my wife sucks our daughter.

That has to be the most erotic story I have ever read.....hard and precum flowing the entire time. I couldn't have imagined a better experience and want it soooo much. I would absolutely love to have a daughter like Pammy to love and be loved by so completely and intimately. Any daughters longing for a daddy to love and be loved by?

Best story I've ever read.

This made me so wet. I couldn't put it down. I ached to read the rest and almost want to read more. Fantastically written. Now I need to go have some orgasmic pleasure myself.

This has to be one of the hottest stories I've ever read.

This was so hot it got me so wet!!! The writing was terrific and I wasn't distracted by poor grammar or bad punctuation! Just able to focus on the story which was terrific!! Please write more about this family!!!

So prick hardening!!

Love this story!!

My pussy is just so wet reading this story. I had to stick my fingers in my pussy to relieve the pressure. I came with an explosion.

This was the best story I've ever read. I swear. I fucked my bf all night long with no explanation as to why I was so hot and bothered. Please please write a second with Vicky. Thx <3

This was fantastic. I had pre cum constantly flowing the entire story. Great job.

I redd this over and over again! Males me cum again and again. I would love to fusk my daddy and mum and be their slut daughter.amazing! Hope u write and upcomming story with viccy<3

I'm still hard and dripping after 2 orgasms. Hope you write a follow on with the visiting Vicky...would love to read about Vicky sucking mom and dad's cum out of Pammy's panties. Very hot!!! Love the fornat, too.

That was the best damn story I'v ever read! GREAT JOB, and loved the one piece format! Thanks

its just like my first time with my dad and his gf

As a woman I found this whole story very arousing.... Page one had me fingering myself and by the end of the story I had brought my self to orgasam multiple times.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM whilel its only a wish on my part i would not mind having my daughters pussy

Unbelievably hot stuff. Good decision to consider Arizona as their hometown... women there are so hot and beautiful that they deserve the honor.

I was dreaming about one while reading.

Erotism is at the highest level and suspense and expectations are just magic. Text is bright. A 100. A pity we can not give 5 stars again after each time we re-read the story

I loved this story, got me so turned on, i was hard each time i read it, made me cum lots of times. thank you.

As you know I have enjoyed your writing for years Ahab and am sending thanks again for another great story. Actually I have read this story may times, but I guess I forgot to say thanks, so I do so now.

(Just for partial disclosure, Ahab and I have known each other for years from now 2 defunct boards. I want to say it was probably 2007 or maybe a little before when I first started reading his material and continue to enjoy it. Thanks my friend.)

Reading this in public is NOT ADVISED!!!! My pussy got so wet from reading this , I just had to fuck myself under the table silently. WHICH IS NOT AN EASY TASK, LET ME TELL YOU!!

Loved the narration of this and how much of a slut pammy became!

Great use of narrative suspense, and a vivid feel for the power of lust. the characters aren't "deep" but they go deep into desire. It's always better when there is some suspense, will she or won't she and you handle that part really well. Maybe dad could have been a litle more hesitant at the start of play with his daughter but overall it is a fine effort. one of the best.

I had to read this story in a lot of sections because I just couldn't ignore the effect it had. The mommy daddy daughter theresome was perfect. Wish this kept going on o:

So wrong - but oh so fucking right!! Love the mother/daughter coupling, and the threesome is soo erotic.

I also need two days to read, because I suddenly cummed so hard in the middle of that story. That was so hot and a dream fantasy. I had to cum a second time at the end of the story and my cock is still hard thinking about the scenes. I hope there are still a lot of more stories like that.

Very good writing. Keep it up.

Oh my gosh!!!! I wish I could have someone do my like that. So intense. I loved it

this is the best story of its kind I have read. I had to read it in several parts over a few of days, I just had to do something about the effect it was having on me.

Great story, excellent pacing, loved it all.

Wish I had a daughter and wife like this.

I had a good hard-on for all the pages.

My cum was Sooo good when Pammy was sucking her Daddy in the living room after lunch.

Thanks so much for writing and sharing this story. It's definitely one of my favorites on Literotica.

Daddy just might get both his wife AND his daughter pregnant.

There's not much I can say beyond what's already been said. This was a HOT HOT HOT Story.......... Probably like most men, I was dreaming that Daddy was me..... ;-) Of course I never had a daughter and my wife would have had a heart attack, or beat me with every pot and pan she could find....

But being divorced now, I don't have to worry about that....

Reminds me of how my Daddy used to fuck me. God, I miss his huge hungry cock inside my little wet hole. Never met a man that fucked me that good again. Can't wait for the Christmas Days, when I'm home again. I will be his dirty slut until New Years.

Wow, one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Masturbated several times

Absolutely loved this! It made me wet like no other! I literally went thru 2 brand new batteries in my vibrator reading this!

What an amazing family! Well done...

God .... how... jeesh..... I'm speechless....

I loved the story. Very hot and exciting. I would have loved some mention of a gentle swelling to her belly in her account at the end of the story. Wow, turning into a lover of little girls getting knocked up by their daddys', (darn you Reggie). hehe

unbelievably hot! My fave of all time!

....and spunk everywhere!

Great story, Ahabscribe!!

My 5*, take them all.

This is the best story I have ever cum across in here, Loved it and even saved it to my favorite. Would love to find a movie like this,,,,

I wonder how many 5* ratings this story got?!!!!! AWESOME!!

Good Lord, that was the most amazing story ever.

Just wow! Your tales make my mouth water with desire and lust everytime!

I cannot even explain how excited I was through the entire time!

Fuck, I wish I could be Pammy!

I guess till this day no other story managed to drive me to the edge in every fucking word that was being said through every second of it. Just so incredible and amazing.

Your writing is like a taste of heaven, and I wish so badly this could have been continued. I would have loved to see what would happen when Vicky came to visit (I get wet just thinking about it).

Thank you so much for letting us read your amazing stories! Thank you so much!

This is truly the hottest story I've ever read. I can't even begin to describe how arousing, hot, and sexy this is. Well written and great build up. I came more times than I can count to this wonderful hot story.

This story is incredible! I must have came 5 times reading it. I have a total fetish for daddy sex but was extremely turned on by the mummy and daddy incest. This is a must read.

Ohh my....loved it .....would try this anytime....Im sooo juicy wet....Looking to go lick some clit..and suck some cock

My favorite line in the whole story: "There's no merit badge for learning how to get Mom to eat your pussy in the Girl Scouts, you know." There were many funny lines, but this one was super.

A great story well told. I thought things moved a little too fast at times, but unless you want ten pages of redundant description this was just right. Do keep up the good work.

till the end of time one of the best