All Comments on 'The Edge'

More gay bdsm please.

Interesting: A Louisiana woman writing gay male stories

Check out my explorations of Louisiana "fakelore" at

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=753793&page=submissions

I like the feelings that you show in these stories. Glad to see that you have several planned for this series.

Well done, very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Women know what a guy cock sucker wants!! Great story

what happened to your other story? i really liked that one too, did it get removed? =(

Wow, if this is a hint of things to come, I can't wait to see more from you!

I really like this story and hope that you upload more soon!

Very good story well done. Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers :D

This is an amazing start. I can't wait to read more about Cooper and Evan. :)

More please? pretty please?

This is a great story chapter with so much potential. It is a real shame it was left here unfinished.

What a wonderful beginning. I sincerely hope you continue to write and update here! Steamy, yet lovely.

I really enjoyed this story each of the multiple times I've come across it. The lust felt by Cooper is so strong and compelling. I find myself writing a similar story, set in a BDSM club, a master and his slave, and now that I read this again, I believe this story inspired it at least in part. I'd love to see the story completed some day, but leaving it here leaves much more to the imagination.