The Education of Rebecca McFadden

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It filled me in an instant - a flood of hot, salty liquid that stuck to my tongue and the roof of my mouth, and dribbled and drooled down the back of my throat. I could feel myself gagging, my gorge rising as I tried to deal with it and for a moment I really thought I'd choke - but somehow I held my breath and I took it like a champion, and my brain was suffused with the single thought that I was absolutely, totally full...that every orifice in my body had just been flooded with hot, steaming jism and I'd not spilt a single drop.

And after a million years we were still. I remember the feeling as the guy at my face pulled out and I swallowed what he'd given me, and then the curious empty feeling as the one behind me slipped out too. For a moment I felt the cool of the evening air on the gaping opening, and then my sphincter closed and it trapped what was in there, too. I stood up on shaky legs and I staggered to the little seat and sat down and I watched as the three of them pulled on their clothes. They were laughing...nervous little chuckles as they regarded me and realised what they'd done. I knew they'd talk about me afterwards, in the pub perhaps, recounting the story of the little whore who they'd fucked and how she'd taken everything they had to offer.

I didn't care. I was on a high, somewhere in the thin stratosphere of elation. I'd done it, and it was great, and nothing would ever be the same again. I watched in silence as they slipped away into the night and then I was left alone. And you know what? I wasn't ashamed or embarrassed. I sat there and thought about what I'd done, and there wasn't a single moment of regret. It seemed to me that I'd graduated from the boring little miss prissy in a perfect storm, and it had opened my eyes to what you could do if you just let the strings loosen enough. Never again would I regret what could have been; never again would I be backward in taking what I wanted.

I thought of Rachel, too. She'd shafted me, that was for sure. I remember smiling at my choice of words...shafted, metaphorically and in a way physically, too, by arranging tonight's little surprise. But the truth was she'd done me a huge favour. Never again would she be able to laugh at my inexperience or poke fun at my reluctance, and in the next few days she'd hear how well I'd done and it would eat her up.

And as I sat there the rain stopped and the moon appeared, bathing the park in pale celestial light. The puddles of water on the pathway gleamed like discs of bright silver and it reminded me of the pools of shining jism in my body, and I laughed. Little Rebecca McFadden had just been educated and would never, ever, be the same again.

And by and by I rose stiffly to my feet and I left that place, knowing that it wouldn't be long until I returned.

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© Copyright. Hot Sister. September 2012.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very hot story of awakened lust. I was hoping that her lust would drive her to reveal her identity (probably shared by sister anyway), but this story is really two already and easily 3 if the sisters Twins were to bring Suzy. I imagine Suzy would have an urge to lick Becca clean when she’s passed out and then the twins would bring her to the next gazebo gathering.

Her_ToyboyHer_Toyboyover 8 years ago
an intensely arousing story

with an unusual twist that was rendered believably. I loved that the result of Rachel's vengefulness was 'Becca's unintended sexual awakening. Although, the way I read it, Rachel's motive is not explicit. Either way, it was an inventive twist that you pulled off adeptly. And, as was the case with "Lisa", the sex was searing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you, thank you!

That's about all I can say. My juices are still flowing down my thighs, hot and smelly, sweetly smelly with the ambrosia of a woman wet and ready, ready to have her cunt and ass and mouth filled with hard, knowing cocks—and all because of your story.

What's original about this is that usually the plot goes: shy, inexperienced woman with not much sex drive is gang-fucked and ruined. Here, she's gang-fucked and brought to life. I could have wished for some more dialog as the fucking and sucking grew hotter. Her inner feelings are well expressed but not all that arousing for the reader.

Again, great story. One of the best I've found here in years. (I did find a single typo—but I've forgotten what it was,)

Joanna in Northridge CA

Monsoon6391Monsoon6391over 10 years ago
So hot.

Great idea for a story. Not many could pull it off, but this was great. Way to go.

Barkley570Barkley570almost 11 years ago
Well................

Whew! It was a little much with the 3 guys. But the two sisters were well developed and believable. I would have liked her to have gotton together with Jake and him realize it wasn't Rachael. But, that's the happy ending I would have liked. Still, you write a very strong story that I can't stop reading.

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