by apple231601
I loved it, it is well written, I will be waitng for part 2 to cum.
You lost me in the second paragraph with GG cup tits. I didn't bother with the rest. Do you people really know how huge that is? It's not natural and i've never met a woman that large before. They exist, i know.<p>It's silly stories like this that propagate this site these days. It isn't worth even a vote except i have to vote to leave a comment.<p>Grow up. Most readers like reality.
I stayed with it longer than you, but when it reached him having a 23" cock, that's when it destroyed any fantasy value and entered the realm of the ridiculous and the inane.
Totally unrealistic in any way , like others i gave up after the 23 inches , you do have a good imagination so why not put it to some use and try writing a proper erotic story ,im sorry but i have read some rubbish on this site over the years ,and i dont think i have ever given a 00 mark before but this deserves a minus score to be honest
I'm a "balls" woman myself so I loved your descriptions!! A bit hard to swallow(excuse the pun!!) but that's why it was so great!
Nice. Liked the fact that he beat up another man (or rather boy) out of possesive jealousy. More of that, please. ;-)
Absolutely phenomenal story!
I love your stories and can't wait to read Part 02.
Thanks!
Been waiting for a new story from you for a while now and i see you still got it. Excellent descriptions, great sex as usual. All I can say is keep the stories cumming.
Write faster. Jesus Christ you start all this shit then you never finish it, come on it's not like you have a life outside of writing erotic fiction,
cum on 23 inches why not just make it 48 inches and have 4 women use their hands all over it sorta unreal
Loved it! A Mom with huge udders and a massively hung son, and they fuck. How cool is that!
I find this story absolutely disgusting. Wish I had not found it. No mom should ever debauch her own flesh and blood like this. Minus minus minus 100. Call herself a mom? No way!
I did not read every nasty word. Rushed to the end to see if anybody actually liked it. And they actually did...!
Look at your own kids...would you do this to them? Please say NO.
Although its hot when theres huge cock in descriptions 23inches is just a joke. he would lose consciousness just from getting full hard on, fantasy is fantasy right.... its really strange with these oversized "things" and when the female takes it like its nothing after few mins. besides the mom is described more like a slut or sth. would have been better with some relative with more personality(tho who reads it for that). anw pretty decent read but definitely nothing worth reading again. 2/5