All Comments on 'The Elevator'

I ask because the GLARING misspelled "Serise" TOTALLY INTERRUPTED the reverie you had created with your captivating storyline.

EDITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sheeeeeeeeeeesh)

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Apart from the spelling mistake that the person below has gotten <i>way</i> too workec378

d up over, this is hot, Hot, HOT. Please don't rush over the next chapter and spoil it - take as much time as you need to get it exactly right.

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Now I must go play with my super-wet pussy!

would love to read what happens more between the 2 of them

Wow. Your words are so descriptive! It's unlike anything else I've read on this site. Hoping for a sequel. Thank you for sharing!