by Nightwolf
you did an amazing job capturing the suspense. You had me on the edge of my seat thinking they were going to get caught. It was hella sexy and enticing I loved it!!!
no conversations but that was a hot piece of stroke. Five and my undying respect as an artist.
OK, no great characterisation, no great relationship, no obvious motivation... normally I wouldn't give it a five. But this is stroke at it's best. It really works.
I don't comment on many stories, but this one demands it. WOW...This is amazing, well written and just long enough. I've had tons of elevator fantasies like this, but I've never read anything to match what I imagine. GREAT JOB!!!