All Comments on 'The Ellie-Mae Chronicles Ch. 01'

I did enjoy your story but even though you seemed to support Ellie-Mae's rather speedy submission by referring to her sexual arousal--as evidenced by her returning later for more--her compliance seemed just a bit too quick. As a woman who has experienced the results of even just panties rubbing my vulva--irritated and swollen glands--I'm somewhat skeptical of pussy punishment. You do have your disciplinarian acknowledge that he doesn't want to inflict permanent damage, but it is relatively easy to inflict that damage on both male and female sexual organs.

This is well written and I hope that you will be continuing with Ellie Mae's summer vacation with her new master. Five stars.

This was one of the best stories I have ever read and can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh God what a fantasy...mmmmm. May I cane her senseless Sir?