All Comments on 'The End of High School Ch. 03'

This one is better than your first one, where the daughter was completely disrespectful to her moronic parents. This one's a bit more realistic. Keep it up. Just stop staying "Kewl"!

In most of the "Rob in AZ" stories, his girlfriend & eventual wife & all her dughters & their friends shopped for swimsuits at the 'Wicked Weasel' site.

This story feels rushed, I don't feel that there's a connection with the characters.

No innocents with what they do, they both seem to be sluts. So far the grammar in this series is horrible and I expect it will continue through the rest of it, whats with forgetting the girls name.....starts off as Sally then to Jen then back to Sally. You need an editor to spot the mistakes.