All Comments on 'The End of the Road'

with a myriad of stories in between. TK U MLJ LV NV

That is the class of dumb stories that I enjoy very much.

I like the story and the characters, but it was told at too fast a pace. A good story is like fine bourbon and should be aged and enjoyed at leisure, with a woman like the beautiful Patricia close by your side.

Well yes, to look out for their own good.... Nice Read! TU

Although I do agree with the coment about it being a bit rushed I enjoyed the read. You had a good explanation of the identity mix up and of the hero using British terms. You did drop the ball a bit there when you had American characters using terms like "surgery" and "straight away". Regardless a fun read and a high score. Thanks. Jim

Dog tags only had name, serial number and blood type. The other info you described could be used by enemy intelligence. While I enjoyed the story, there was way too much happening in too few words.

... or rather, Sidney43 has it spot on. Too good a tale to tell in only three Lit.com pages. IMHO if you're going to spin a yarn, spin it... and spin it... and spin it. Please don't get me wrong. To me this is a very great backbone without enough meat; I rated it 4/4. Could have been so much more, but is less than the effort put into. (Please take this as constructive crit, your skill is obvious but I don't think this piece lives up to its potential.)

By the by, if you can see gold in a rock, it contains much more than enough to be economic even in the 50's

full of fun and humour....can well imagined people involved in conflicts got mistaken as someone else either by design or mistake....a nice little tale of finding his old sweetheart again and getting a new job as sheriff....nice one....

Love the story. AAAAA++++++