All Comments on 'The Entity Pt. 01'

I'm new to reading you, and I am very impressed by this story:the start of quite an epic, I trust and hope!

Roger

Can't wait for Pt. 02. Like a story with so many aspects going on at the same time.

This is professional quality publishable writing. I have gotten to chapter 4 so far, and can't put it down.

I look forward to reading the rest. Just one thing - Woo is not a Japanese name. Linda's family is chinese-japanese, perhaps?

This so good it should be a published as a novel.