All Comments on 'The Evolution of a Bet'

This was an exceptionally great read from start to finish. I would love to see more from these two.

It's obvious that you take great care in your writing, the way it's presented, the way you introduce the characters and the chemistry between the two. What I really love about this is that you barely describe the characters, that's something I love. I can make the characters look like how I want them to look.

Bloody fantastic, great read!

And very erotic. Voting not working but this gets a five star rating. Thanks for writing.

Voting not working but it deserves a 6 (have to settle for a 5)

Usually I don't like long stories with the ending of sex...but this story was phenomenal. You applied ample detail to the things of the game and the mere detail of the characters. This is a kind of story that seems like it could be continued with the advancement of what happens 10 years down the road or something of the matter.

Great story, thank you.

Great story. Well thought out and beautifully written. Being an Aussie myself I loved the references and that true Aussie language. Well done.

wow that was a well written piece. The buildup was nice and the internal emotion was a nice addition. the internal conscience that you displayed was very respectful and extremely erotic at the same time. the best aspect of this story wasn't just the detail but rather the understanding of how women require care to be properly satisfied.

I didn't give you all the credit you deserve when I read this the first time (I lost the link) but This story, again, proved to be so totally arousing the second time around. Your skillful character and theme development demonstrated the the same approach as you so aptly describe to woo any mate - take it slow, earn their trust, don't push the envelope and let it happen as and when the juices flow. That's a good lesson for any encounter, sexual or social. I also enjoyed Snot Bright, in case any readers need direction to your other postings. Hope we see more offerings. Dynakid1 aka Tony

excellent even if a little sappy, mushy at the end.

Hiloved this one too and would love to have more.but was good ending to it.

I have read all your stories down to this one, and this is by far the best. I can’t wait to read the rest.