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by Grayeyedsub2
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drewskimeskiover 14 years agoBest yet
Gray,
This my favourite of your stories, so far. They just keep getting better. Keep it up. Give us more.
Anonymousover 14 years agoWhen did she get changed?
He's going all ga-ga over her hip-hugger jeans in the bar, and yet when they get into the alley she's wearing a skirt. Who is she - Hermione Grainger? And why change the tense halfway through?
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