All Comments on 'The Factory'

It is amazing!!! I love it!

What a great way to end a day at work! Perhaps I should stop by your office for coffee one evening as this certainly got me going? Oh and coming to of course! x

wow. this story really got me going. i love the use of restrained power. extremely sexy, i almost came from reading it!

This was a really great story to read! Writing it in third and then first person is challenging, and you pulled it off beautifully.

I loved the risk, the bravado, and the total confidence in Him. Well written too.