by Lostzilla
there are many good writers on Literotica and you are not one of them. You are one of the few that can be call a great writer. I have enjoye this latest piece of art on so many diferent levels part of me would love to see this continue further but there is the side of me that feels it could be ruined if you were to do so. Whatever you decide to do i shall look forward to your next publication
This is a real romance. I've known the feelings, but never been able to quite get them on paper. There is a point when two people get together and make a connection such as this. How would someone so young actually understand as he does about women.
Thanks for a truly lovely story.