All Comments on 'The Family Tree'

This is probably the best love story that I have read on LIT. I especially enjoyed the Grandfather and granddaughter parts!! I can just imagine a 91 yr old man teasing a young lady and her teasing him. It was done very well, and in great taste! You did a great job with this story! Keep it up. You can only get better!!

Thanks for a well written story, it felt as if it could have been real. Yes, the real Mc Coy.

well written. thanks for a fine story

One of the best sibling love stories that I have read on this site. Thanks so much for having written it.

enough said just friggin awesome

it could have been better if they had stayed together and told everyone about sean and mary and themselves a second chapter would have been nice going into the mothers side of the family and more about their baby

Loved it just the way it was done

Well written and well told.

One of the best (if not the best) stories i've ever read on Literotica!!!! keep up the good work!!!!

you never said if they ever told the rest of the family about sean and mary being siblings i wonder what kind of reaction it would have caused needs another chapter

....had time to wash my hands! Peeping Tom here saying: "It's your world and I'm just visiting!" :-P

YOU BEST TO CONTINUE THIS SAGA YOU CAN GO SO MANY WAYS YOU HAVE A CHALLENGE WITH SCOURIES PREGNANT POND FARM SUCH A DELIGHT NOW GET TO WORK

once again we get less than half a story from a lazy writer either finish it or delete it but don't leave it like this. half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.

Another great story from the great Mr. A. (I don't know what the last commenter was yapping about.) Jake and Pam come from a long line of ancestors who knew where a brother's big hard cock belongs and how perfectly his cock fits his sister's cute little cunt. Jake realizes that he's inherited the sibling fuck gene when he hugs his sis and his big hard on presses against her. Pam gets the message when she feels her brother hard against her belly and gets wet between her legs like never before. Jake's cock fits Pam's cunt like they were made for each other (they were), and when the boy unloads his brotherly balls up his sister's sweet little twat and shoots her full of his creamy semen, all their sibling-fucking ancestors are looking down, whooping and laughing and cheering them on.

you started good but as usual you FAILED to finish the story, why bother posting less than half of the story? you did the readers a real disservice by not finishing the story. what happens now do they tell the family what they learned? do they keep fucking? do they get divorced so they can be together? do they investigate the mothers side of the family? you give us less than half a story and expect us to give rave reviews NO WAY IN HELL SHOULD THAT HAPPEN. this has plot holes big enough to drive a semi through time you either finished it PROPERLY or deleted it so readers don't waste time on an unfinished story. it a good thing i'm not the webmaster or you would be in real trouble.

I surely read this sensual story quite some time back as I recall the little pun but according to the magic machine (computer) I did not vote.

Here goes at last, 5* well deserved.

What wonderful feelings you describe for these siblings.

Great to discover this story in the Randoms! It is one of the best of all the Literotica collection. I think it is wonderful by itself, but have to agree with those who wish Ahabscribe had continued for another chapter or so. What might have been the reactions of Jake and Pam's typical uptight American relatives at hearing the truth about their ancestors - and Irish contemporaries? Maybe some of them would have been inspired to follow the example, hmm? More real McCoys!

OMG! I had a blast reeding this story!

I loved this story. It was heartwarming, sweet, and incredibly hot. If this is a typical story from you, I'm sure I will enjoy reading many others. Thanks for writing it.

I really liked this story.....Jake and Pam and their discovery of a long history of family loving, and that leading to their own revelations about their passion for each other. Its was a great story and the fools who bashed it because they felt it wasnt complete just need to apply fingers to keyboard and write something themselves to see if they can do it any friggin better.....

I loved ' Christmas with Mom ' , didn't like ' Family Obligations ' very much but thoroughly enjoyed ' The Family Tree '. Well done , what a great story and thank you !!!

I really enjoyed this story. Being Irish of course made it a little more special. We have our American cousins continually on the ancestral trail - now I am wondering what else they get up to! Well done.

Great short story. I love the buildup. This is a gem that I'm happy to have stumbled upon. A+++ 5 Stars

A genuinely loving and passionate love story. thank you

When tracing a family tree most people go straight up the line, father, to father, to father, etc. Perhaps more time should be spent looking at the siblings.

lol

I loved it. 5 stars,

I truly enjoyed this story.

well written, fun, sexy. 5 stars

Cute story, well done 5 stars

Love it

Great storyline ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A wonderful story, so full of love. I don't think my sister and I will every experience this, but I am thrilled by the love these couples share in the dream you share with us readers. I hold Ireland in a special place in my heart, knowing somewhere in the past some Irish ancestry is mine. Thank you again for sharing you imagination.

Excellent writing!

It would have been cool if the granddaughter was pregnant.

Great !!!! Just sort of too bad Pam is married. Maybe after GP Brian passes away Moria will be looking for a husband

Beautiful story about a beautiful love. I always regretted not having a sister. I am convinced we would have been lovers, also.

The Dream of Sean fucking Mary...

Marvelous...

A bit of a silly fantasy but without anything awful turning off the reader. 4/5