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Anonymousover 18 years agoGood story
Good use of dialogue. Not too much description. Well-revealed thoughts of POV character. A little jumpy. So she all the sudden was giving him a blowjob? Need better lead-in. And I didn't really get that funny part.
Samuelxabout 16 years agoMy favorite writer !!!
I love your stories, Max. On Literotica, you're my favorite writer !!!!
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