by IvyMae
What a nice way of writing you have; making the location/place in time interesting, the people relatable and likable adds to the enjoyment of the well written erotic parts of this story. I'm "old fashioned" and believe nothing's hotter than a married couple in love! Thanks for your loving and lovely story!
You have a great eye for detail and are able to evoke so much..a sense of both characters, atmosphere and passion. So many nice touches...You're an artist.