All Comments on 'The Filly & The Stud Ch. 03'

Finally, an erotic love story without a major, past event that keeps the major characters from falling in love. I liked it so much, I am going to read another one.

Why mention the cards he left and not describe what's on them? Why did David make the trip to see Jason? I'm clueless.

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. You did an excellent job of showing their relationship change and progress. And the sex was so hot!

I really, really loved your stories. Why? ummmmm...I like the passion, dominance, and protectiveness of the male characters combined with their inner or rarely unmasked insecurities.

Your writing is awesome & fluid. Generally, very 3D - you write about how things are perceived to all 5 senses of your characters.

It boggles my mind how so many skilled writers (technically & creatively) end up with lopsided and odd stories b/c they forget to describe sights, colors, tastes, and other sensory info that bring a character to life.