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All Comments on 'The Finer Points of Sheila Ch. 02'

by bluefox07

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a few hiccups

There are some writing flaws (technical errors), but I'm loving the story line. Write on!

-- KVK

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Rich dialogue

You're a master of dialogue; it sounds like the music from the dance floor. Even the hints of cigarette smoke pervade the clauses. Wonderful!

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