All Comments on 'The First Time'

Very good, Just the way I like it short and sweet.

Far too much use of the word "gently", cardboard characters, no emotional buildup, all spoilt what might have been a great story.

Loved your story! I'm definitely reading all of your submissions now. Keep up the good work!

liked the story....

if i had an aunt like that i would make sure she was pregnant to me every chance i got to knock her up

Very good story

i loved this story I wish that i had a hot aunt to fuck