All Comments on 'The First Time: A Short Story'

Nicely written - and an enjoyable read. More please, Sir?

very nicely done please add more would really enjoy hearing more.

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I enjoyed this! Please another ^_^

I really hope this is the start to a series, I want to know what master has in store for her.

The writing's not too shabby. I liked the part with the ice.

And also I have received lots of positive comments and people wanting the story to go on. So go ahead and give me suggestions on where you would like to see the story go.