All Comments on 'The Flower Girl Ch. 01'

I loved this one. Once again, you have created real characters. I love the fact that "Flower" is so innocent that she doesn't know what she likes.

These are the defining aspects of your craft. Very descriptive and momentous. You're definitely getting more skilled. Even in three pages, the lack of a detailed plot hasn't gotten boring. The details spatter in, slowly. Groovy.

The slowly revealed details about the characters were nice. Something about this "gentleman" rubbed me the wrong way, but readers don't have to like your characters in order for a story to work. I liked Yuuka and would like to read more about her.

As you said in your bio, "You re-read the ones that you like. So I have done here. I do not have the expertise to write such a story, but never the less enjoy them. I commented on this story and others of your creation that they are among my favorite. That has not changed.

In the 60's there was a saying, "Right on". For you the way I would put it to you is "Write On!"

How I wish I could be yuuka

awesome

As much as the words frightened and excited me as I read this tale of manhandling, I longed to be Yuuka with a man as skilled as this - a man that was capable of taking total control. What an education she is getting and I greatly anticipate reading more.

Amazing writing, exquisite sex, great story, certainly a nice read. My cock is hard!

I keep coming back to this story every couple of years or so. Strong imagery, and very compelling to me.