by Cathleen
Well-crafted story... great "local flavor" with all the descriptions of the Boston area. (Even if I hadn't lived in Boston for a few years the details alone would have kept me reading the piece.) I *thought* it was Brad on page 1, but wasn't really sure until you told me. Nice buildup and suspense factors. Keep on writing... please... :)
Wonderful story, well written. Very emotional! Thank you!