All Comments on 'The Forbidden Muse Ch. 01'

Lets see how it develops?

rotten, no good for nothing SOB. You leave us hanging like you did on page 4, "... to be continued," there is going to be my cousin Guido knocking at your door! Harumph! ... to be continued!

A very original and erotic tale - one that i so look forward to seeing more of. If he were real, we'd be nominating Roger for sainthood! One of the best mother/son stories, I've read, here or anywhere!

A great story that is well written,but you're a teaser.

Damn, I was pissed when I got to chapter four.You have me so involved now,I'm am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Well done..........Rich

Nice slant. I like you idea and the way you express it has a great flow. Information is a fun read.

Thanks for the work.