All Comments on 'The Freshman Ch. 27'

I'm surprised that, with all the views, there have been no comments. This is a strange, complex, story, more than just punishment. We see several youngsters growing up and maturing before our eyes. The varied backgrounds are well described and the emotions seem real.

Thanks.

Here is why. 27 chapters of repeating does not work on the internet, it might for a book series but almost never on the internet.

Just like overly long paragraphs.

Unless exceptional and this is not. I could not get all the way through chapter one.

Almost no one has that long of an attention span. So they read the first couple of paragraphs and wander off, never getting to the comments page.