All Comments on 'The Full Package - Tuesday'

This is an extraordinarily well-written story: good characters, realistic dialogue, and very hot, well-paced sex. Many thanks!

biggest peice of pig shit I have ever read. So dave is a wimp and a cuckold and Cody is a slut. The people at the hotel are predators that would never come close to being in real life...Lisa is a slut and a whore...Why did you say that they came to the hotel to reconnect with each other. Retarded people like the ones you portray should not be allowed out in public with out a minder...sheesh...you suck as a writer...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

I'm completely fed up with Lisa. No matter how shittily she behaves the stupid husband always manages to allow himself to be treated as if he was at fault. He needs to get rid of her, immediately.<p>

I also hate that this is becoming a non consent story, what with all the drugged up sex, passing out and the predatory behavior of the locals.<p>

I also absolutely hate every scene where the husband behaves like a mindless, nutless idiot.<p>

Despite these things I still love the story. Any story that can keep me wanting more despite hating much of what is happening is one rivetingly well told story. I'm just looking forward now to the cunt of a wife heading on home, leaving the idiot husband to chaperone Cody, who remains the only sympathetic character in this story. Looking forward to seeing how she behaves once big sis is out of the way.<p>

Just don't turn this thing into a total non consent story. Don't ruin it.

Of course I want to read more !!~~!!

The characters in this "story" are retarded, especially Dave the wimp.