All Comments on 'The Function Ch. 01'

by gb0138

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exjockexjockover 15 years ago
Edit Please

Not a bad start but the story jumps around near the end - put it all in order

InsatiableDesireInsatiableDesireover 15 years ago
Great start.....

I am so looking forward to Chapter 2.....will you see her again? What will you do? Don't leave me in suspense...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What the hell happened to this text?

Did anyone edit this before it was posted? Apparently not.

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