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When she woke up she asked, "Did that really happen last night, or did I dream the whole thing?" We couldn't keep our hands off of each other the whole day. I told Brie how aroused I was by her total shamelessness the night before, how much I enjoyed watching the men fucking her and her response to them. Brie said that she had love being so utterly naughty and slutty. The complete wantonness of giving herself to a complete stranger in a room full of onlookers had sent her to another level where she existed only as a receptacle for male lust. She said that the feeling of totally surrendering to the men and letting them do what they wanted to her was strangely intoxicating.
We talked about whether she ever wanted to do something like that again, and she said that she would have to think about it. A one-time occurrence would keep it special and set it as a life experience that she would always treasure and talk about. But, she said she would be open to talking about it at some point.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI'm sorry,but when i married my wife it was because she was so special to me. In the 8th year of our marriage when i caught her fucking her boss in what turned out to be a 7 month long affair,she wasn't special anymore. Just another run of the mill cheating cunt. Five months later,we were divorced and because of a prenup and a family trust, the slut only got 10% of our community property. No kids,and i really dodged a bullet with this whore.
squirtelguyover 2 years agoLiked it. But.
But.
Lots of sex even with big clocks does not make women loose. It is a weird story element.
My wife, in fact, gets tighter after a gang bang. Her pussy decides it is done and closes shop.
Anonymousover 2 years agoFour stars. Good title and story tags.
The opening hook is well-worn but used effectively. Foreshadowing the narrator's and wife's characters was obvious, but also effective. The first plot point comes early but works well because the author gets into the story straight-away without a lot of build-up. Story has a fairly quick pace. No midpoint or twists or anything -- pretty straight-forward.
Wife's early dialog is a little too on-the-nose. Most people speak subtextually unless pressured to do otherwise.
I felt that the story progressed into the main action a little too quickly. Description of the action was more of a play-by-play than you would want from a first-person narrative, but that's common in amateur erotic fiction and easily ignored.
The only thing I miss about this story is that I did not feel as close to the primary characters as I would have liked. That can be corrected either through character development, or by describing the narrator's expectations, emotions, and reactions better. It was a great story, but I didn't get aroused by it. I admit that I was a little disappointed when the beginning of the gangbang began to resemble a cheap Xhamster gonzo blowbang clip.
Personally wasn't into the rimming, but I know it's a thing and didn't hold it against the story.
I do not know what the attraction is to the word "slut" that many authors here have. No woman goes to a sex club or sex party to be called a slut, a bitch, or a whore. In fact, those are the words which keep her out of such situations! I hate to flirt with the word "empower", but you guys need to allow the women who are the objects of your action scenes to be full and equal participants, even if submissively, without the degradation. Unless the character as depicted actually wants that, of course. I didn't hold that against the story, either.
I'll be honest, I got pulled out of the story about 2/3rds of the way down the first page. I know you tried to save her, but the wife's character went out-of-character when she got into the hot-tub. I would rather have seen a much longer, or a multi-part, story which would have more-believably culminated in this climactic gangbang scene.
Would read more of the author's stories, for sure.
