All Comments on 'The Gap in the Curtains Ch. 02'

I lived through Anne's side of the story, though I showed myself through a partly closed bathroom window to an unsuspecting audience and had the thrill of my life.

The only criticism is that you explained too much in the story. I sort of connect to the characters instantly and found the explaining... Well, what am I talking about? It's a superb story. I just can't wait for the next chapter. So, PLEASE hurry!

Thanks mate - liked it - waiting for the next installment

Part 3 is up now

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-gap-in-the-curtains-ch-03