by gizm4c
Gentle, sweet, wish all relationships were like theirs, commitment ceremony made me cry.
A beautiful entry, filled with nothing but love. If this is the last part, it is a fitting end. If not, I look forward to more. I have truly enjoyed reading this story.
i have enjoyed this story very much, but this chapter felt like i was reading a news paper article. the story needed to be told more and discribed less for me.
I've just discovered this story and read it start to finish. Aside from the fact that it needed a proofreader to catch inconsistencies, this is one of the best plots I have read.
I sincerely hope you are planning a sequel to explore the rest of Forever yours. Take the job outreach; I bet Alex has a story to tell. Do the guys fulfill their desire to be fathers? I bet these guys know lots of ways to show their love for each other and especially those less fortunate. You have laid such a fine foundation please don't end the story here!
Like jeansguy I just finished reading from start to finish and loved it and agree a final closing chapter or two is needed for the exact reasons below. Well done loved every chapter and hope to see more from you soon
I loved every chapter. My name is Cliff so I put myself in the story. I want more of these two lovers.
such a great story. just the right amount of hot and sweet. feels like it needs one more chapter though. maybe an epilogue to show the men's lives down the road to explain how they completed their family, etc. hope to read more soon.
that was a wonderful story. It would be fantastic if you were to revisit these guys a couple of years down the line, to see how they are getting on. The fact that they love kids gives you ample opportunity to show how a gay couple can successfully bring up children. Thanks again for a lovely love story.
well, you have said this is the longest story you have ever written, I have to say I enjoyed the whole journey. Can we jump 5 years , when they consider kids. Love your story man. simonjessex@hotmail.com