All Comments on 'The Gardener and the LIfeguard'

by nevets13

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 12 years ago
Nice story.

I liked this story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
rushed

seems rushed and unrealistic needs to be two or three time longer and spread out more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
started ok but ...

10 inches spoiled it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
NICE JOB,

I LIKED THE STORY!!!!!!! KEEP GOING

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

18 yrs old w/ 10 inches... but never got laid before.....

get real man...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Get real

10 inches?

ChasBChasBover 11 years ago
Why ?

Why are so many writers enamored of huge tits and cocks? Give the average guy or girl a little credit, people!! Size C and 6 inches is fine, maybe a smidge big.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
not good

big tits and big cocks are a turn off. this was so unrealistic as soon as she started to get bitchy he would have left and avoided her keep it believable please. big tits are so ugly you know they will be down around her knees by fifty nothing wrong with B's and C's

RecHikerRecHikerover 8 years ago
Interesting story

I liked your story line and hope there's more since Deb and Sean's parents are going to be gone for a week. You left us when they headed into their parent's bed "to continue their relationship."

Thanks for sharing and I gave you 5*

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Another idiot

OMG!!!! Another 10 incher. You idiot. Once you tell us that we all know you have a tiny 4 incher. Grow up. Try to write something real will you?

Girls hate 10 inchers. THEY HURT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

10 inch cock? What are you? A fucking horse?

smltwnguysmltwnguyalmost 2 years ago

Aside from the 10 incher not a bad story.

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