by nevets13
seems rushed and unrealistic needs to be two or three time longer and spread out more.
Why are so many writers enamored of huge tits and cocks? Give the average guy or girl a little credit, people!! Size C and 6 inches is fine, maybe a smidge big.
big tits and big cocks are a turn off. this was so unrealistic as soon as she started to get bitchy he would have left and avoided her keep it believable please. big tits are so ugly you know they will be down around her knees by fifty nothing wrong with B's and C's
I liked your story line and hope there's more since Deb and Sean's parents are going to be gone for a week. You left us when they headed into their parent's bed "to continue their relationship."
Thanks for sharing and I gave you 5*
RecHiker
OMG!!!! Another 10 incher. You idiot. Once you tell us that we all know you have a tiny 4 incher. Grow up. Try to write something real will you?
Girls hate 10 inchers. THEY HURT.