All Comments on 'The Gathering Ch. 01'

by LittleOneWishes

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spearish almost 11 years ago

Very promising start !

I'm hooked ,just please please finish it :-)

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

great world creation

I'd like to read more. It's very erotic already.

josephstevens almost 11 years ago

First Story?!

So this is 'not much action' is it!? Well, I for one can't wait til the action starts. This is already a highly arousing story, and I like it very much! Detail good, characters interesting, women small and pretty, men hard and lusty! Makings of a great series...