All Comments on 'The Gathering Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

Loving the story so far

I can't believe that you are going to make me wait for the outcome of this showdown.

I know that the wait will be worth it though.

bruce22 over 13 years ago

Nice smooth delivery

unlike Old West Whiskey (rotgut); The story is completely foreseeable but still highly enjoyable..

Anonymousover 13 years ago

KUDO's Author

Your talent shines through with the informality being infectious.<P>

More should take a moment to return to the Old West and be thoroughly entertained.<P>

With Very High Regard

Storm113 over 10 years ago

yes yes

3 great characters together. i love it.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

gaathering 02

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

rightbank over 7 years ago

when the writing is good

the story can stand on it's own.

cliff hangers are annoying and not needed.

LilacQueen15 over 3 years ago

Nicely done!

dirtyoldbiman 10 months ago

Like how you tie all your MC's together

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