All Comments on 'The Gems--Jade Ch. 04'

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MizT over 12 years ago

Interesting

The Queen seems to have taken the escape of the King rather well, either that or her brain tells her sex is more important. I guess I expected her to rage more. If Lord Gramsby is able to help Lynna escape maybe that will rile the Queen. Speaking of Royalty, how are the King and Jade doing?

I agree w/you that the story should only be published when you think it's ready. It is YOUR story to be told the way YOU want.

Anonymousabout 12 years ago

PLEASE

Continue this story soon!

ausvirgo over 7 years ago

Loving it.

One part didn't seem very coherent, but could be meant to be that way, as it involves magic and illusion.

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