by BenjiBright
So I clicked your story on a whim. I'm a straight woman; I don't usually even read Gay Male. That I'm sitting here eager to know what happens next suggests you've a real knack for story telling :). Love the time period and the character development thus far. Good luck with the next chapter!
Like the beginning. Keep rolling. Now you got me wondering what the hell happened to Jack.
Don't keep us hang in here too long, I do love this start :)